The rain glittered my face with unstoppable pounds of sadness. as I leaped towards the pizzeria my face got filled with joy, as I started to look through the doors all I saw were children smiling and laughter with the animatronics freddy, chica, foxy, and of course bonnie. Bonnie was always my favourite no matter if they created a new animatronic. It would have been much more better if my family was not broke because of my stupid sister. She always gets what she wants no matter if it was 1000$ or 100$ my family always paid attention to her. Hey at least my friend has my back, she has the same type or same familiar family with a rich family who always takes attention to the youngest, we were friends ever since middle school, we had so many arguments when I was 5.“No! Stop it kadie”, “just give me the ball Jeremy”, man I remember it very clearly, as I had flashbacks to when I was younger my family came rushing to me, “son never ever run away from us again you kno-” I interrupted, “why do you always care about my sister! You always give her what she wants no matter how much it is, even if its my birthday you always focus on her!”. I was outraged to even be in this family, my face red with my hands scrunched up like a ball. I Rushed inside the pizzeria trying to hide away from my family. There was a massive croud in the middle where the animatronics are, but I saw something a gummy source of substance on the stage and it looked like my friend kadie. “Man she must be very famous to have a life like statute” when I was thinking about the gummy like substance. My family came in looking everywhere for me. I tried to run up to the stage because nobody could enter and I succeeded I was hiding near the curtain where the gummy like substance was, and everyone jumped onto he stage and ate the gum, the stage announcer yells “NO EATING THE NOSE!” it was very confusing as anyone could eat any part of the body but I continued to watch.
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Tuesday, November 23, 2021
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nice story but make it shorter!
ReplyDeleteIm going to give a guess that maybe it could be a year after gumdrop angel?
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool
Keep on writing.
Bye from zac