Tuesday, August 3, 2021
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This post is cool because it is funny and smart great job Jacob keep up the good work bye from your friend Zac.
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hi Jacob your post is great i like the Ronald one
ReplyDeletehello Jacob
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good and cool funny blog post you have made
How long did this take
what was you favorite part about making this?
other then that keep up the good work!
From Savarnah
This is amazing because of what you have introdused, this reminds me of when I went on the hydroslides at hanmer springs. Maybe next time you could add some facts about slides that are a bit empty. I look forward to seing your next post. BYE 🤗🤗
ReplyDeleteHello Jacob
ReplyDeleteThis advertisement has about a 5 out of 10 chance of getting people to go to new Zealand. I think the title can use a improvement but other wise its good. I advise you to change to colour of some text because it can be hard to read the text with the background.
Kia Ora Jacob,
ReplyDeleteThis advertisement is a masterpiece I like how you added some popular places in New Zealand to start attracting people to your advertisement. I also like how you added the most visited place in your advertisement. Also how you said the hobbit was filmed in New Zealand, Jacob you did a great job.
Have a great day!