today I will be showing my persuasive writing about should trees be turned into an amusement park? would you do that? anyways lets see if i change your mind
Wednesday, July 7, 2021
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hi jacob you have put alot of thought into your writing next time check to see your published work is easy to read for the reader.
ReplyDeleteHi Jacob i like your story about turned trees into an amusement park but you could make the thing more bigger so we can read more but it's OK.
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ReplyDeleteHey Jacob great post I think this post is awesome because you made a great point. also next time you should stretch the text box so we don't have to scroll down so much bye from your friend Zac.
ReplyDelete:) :) :)