Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, May 10, 2021
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi, it's Hunter from Ahipara School, I like your slide about dog tricks and tips. I learnt a lot of new facts.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great post, it reminds me of my dog and my slide. Maybe next time you could make this slide easier to make by only adding a few slides, but putting more writing in it, and stick with one picture (also make the writing easier by putting a highlight colour in). Other than those this post is amazing and I hope this has helped others. BYE š¤š¤
ReplyDeleteHi Jacob
ReplyDeleteI like your slides about dogs it was really nice when you said if a dogs own on its own leave it alone. you did a fantastic job. Next time you should put more words in the end one.
By Tama
Hi Jacob i like the dog pictures i am learning.
ReplyDeleteHi Jacob,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good and has a lot of important information.
I loved this because of the helpful information and the dog pictures.
You taught me how to act around a dog when its on its own and to leave it alone. Next time you could add in about how to approach a dog and how to save your hand getting bitten off.
Why did you choose other dogs? Maybe you could've added a husky picture?
-Jennifer