Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, April 9, 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteHi! Jacob I think your sailing post is really creative and cool.Their is not much that you can improve so its a great post! You made me think of When I went sailing. Oh there is one more thing Maybe next time do a bit more writing and a bit less pictures.
ReplyDeleteFrom your pal,Zac:-D
its sad you didn't come
ReplyDeletei like the post :)