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Monday, April 12, 2021
Autumn Song Does this remind you of Autumn
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this post is the best. this actually does remind me of Autumn (somehow). for my thoughtful side of the post, I would like to say that this reminds me of a slide I have made on my blog of not 1 not 2 not 3 but TEN !! different healthy foods I haven't tried yet (and they all had to start with different letters. maybe next time you could start your post bye saying hello in a different language. if you would like to se my blog, you know were to find it. BYE 😀😀
ReplyDeleteGreat song Jacob I Really like the thought you put into it and the tune of it. Great job and good luck in future projects.
ReplyDeleteBye From Your friend Zac,
Hi Jacob,
ReplyDeleteThis post is really good it actually sounds like autumn to me you did a great job.
Mabe next time you could make it a bit longer so I can I enjoy it for
longer😃
This reminded me of AUTUMN!!!
Hi Jacob Cyris from Ahipara school here. I like your Autumn song it really does remind me of Autumn. Maybe add some writing to tell us some more about it.Have you made any other beats? Great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Jacob i think it sounds like it yeah it sounds familiar.
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