Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
my birthday
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Wow, look at all of those presents Jacob! I'm pleased you had a wonderful birthday, you might always remember this particular birthday and what was happening. Enjoy the rest of your birthday.
ReplyDeleteI had a great birthday even though people couldn't see me i still had my family to play games. I was so lucky had two cakes one with my grandad and also one cake came from my family. thank you for the comment hope you enjoy the rest of your day.
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