Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, June 21, 2019
my book report
this week we are doing our book review. its were you have to create a story based on an actual story. and you have to do the setting the theme and the characters
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I loved your book report because it tells me about the story really well and it has a lot of description. You brought me back to when I read a book like this and there was clowns trying to take over someone's soul. Try and reread your story before you post it because it had a large amount a spelling mistakes and some of the sentences did not make sense. Maybe you could also and a picture of a circus or something to do with the circus.
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